CINDERELLA!!!!!!!

- Once upon a time there lived an unhappy young girl.


- Her mother was dead and her father had married a widow with two daughters.


- She had to work hard all day.


- Cinderella used to spend long hours all alone talking to the cat.


- Cinderella had a wonderful time at the ball until she heard the first stroke of midnight.

Picture taken from: http://disney.wikia.com/wiki/Cinderella_(character)

Mobile Retelling Project Rubric
CATEGORY	4	3	2	1	POINTS
Setting	Lots of vivid, descriptive words are used to tell the audience when and where the story takes place.	Some vivid, descriptive words are used to tell the audience when and where the story takes place.	The audience can figure out when and where the story took place, but there isn't much detail (e.g., once upon a time in a land far, far away).	The audience has trouble telling when and where the story takes place.	3
Characters	The main characters are named and clearly described The audience knows and can describe what the characters look like and how they typically behave.	The main characters are named and described (through words and/or actions). The audience has a fairly good idea of what the characters look like.	The main characters are named. The audience knows very little about the main characters.	It is hard to tell who the main characters are.	4
Problem	It is very easy for the audience to understand what problem the main character(s) face and why it is a problem.	It is fairly easy for the audience to understand what problem the main character(s) face and why it is a problem.	It is fairly easy for the audience to understand what problem the main character(s) face and but it is not clear why it is a problem.	It is not clear what problem the main character(s) face.	4
Solution to Problem in Story	The solution to the problem is easy-tounderstand and is logical. There are no loose ends.	The solution to the problem is easy-tounderstand and is somewhat logical.	The solution to the problem was a little hard to understand.	No solution was attempted or it was impossible to understand.	3
Accuracy of Retelling A Story	The storyteller includes all major points and several details of the story s/he is retelling.	The storyteller includes all major points and one-two details of the story s/he is retelling.	The storyteller includes all major points of the story s/he is retelling.	The storyteller forgets major points of the story s/he is retelling.	3
Mobile	The student turns in an attractive and complete mobile of the story in the correct format.	The student turns in a complete mobile of the story in the correct format	The student turns in a complete mobile of the story, but the format was not correct.	The student turns in an incomplete mobile of the story.	4
	Total:				21
Teacher Comments	The story tells about the fantastic success and it can to involve to the readers.

The rubric was taken from: http://www.ckcolorado.org/units/4th_grade/4_FabulousFolktales.pdf